“Where is he?” Sita thought as she
sat in their new home. It was a
beautifully crafted cottage made just for Rama and herself. It was Lakshmana’s wedding gift to his
brother and her; its beauty blew the newlyweds away. While Sita was getting ready for bed, Rama
stepped out to get some fresh air and explore the property, but he hadn’t
returned yet and it had nearly been half an hour. Knowing she had joined the brothers on a
dangerous journey, her mind began to wonder and she worried of his safety so
she slipped into her jeweled robe and sandals and cautiously, but hurriedly,
ran to the back door. But then she
stopped sharply at the window.
In
the yellow haze of the setting sun, she saw Rama, but he was not alone. Standing in front of him was the most
beautiful woman Sita had ever laid eyes on.
Her hair glittered like silk under the sun’s parting rays. Her eyes shown bright, blinding Sita with
their splendor. Her cheeks were flushed
red with lust. Every curve on her body
screamed to be caressed. This woman was
otherworldly as if a spell of desire was placed on every human, man or woman,
who placed eyes on her. But being a true
beauty herself, Sita was able to shake off the compulsion. She narrowed in on her husband Rama.
Rama
stood there comfortable, not resisting this woman’s company, but to be fair, he
wasn’t welcoming it either. The woman
inched forward, claiming Sita’s husband with her body language and the craving
in her eyes was enough to cripple Sita with jealousy. Sita flung open the door loud enough to grab
the attention of the unwelcomed visitor but stood there confidently as to not
seem threatened by the woman. “Rama
darling, who is this guest of ours?”
Sita
watched as the woman’s mouth gaped open.
The beautiful visitor momentarily appeared threatened. Sita, content with the woman’s noticeable
vulnerability, walked up to her husband and placed a protective hand on his
arm. The woman began to stutter, trying
to regain her composure. Sita looked at
her contemptibly and stood strong next to her husband.
(Sita standing next to Rama as he condemn's the woman (Shurpanakha) mage from India Myth and Legend by Donald Mackenzie. Illustration by Warwick Goble. Found on Wikipedia)
The
woman turned to Rama and began sputtering nonsense. Sita stood there amused at the insults hurled
her way. Apparently she was a sorceress
who was tricking her own husband with a mirage of beauty. It was truly laughable. Rama caught on to the humor of the situation
and sarcastically retorted to the woman, “Oh my! She is a sorceress? How could I have been so blind? You must be telling the truth because you
yourself would know what it means to be truthful and show our true selves. You, of course, are naturally this beautiful;
no use of magic or power is used to portray your beauty. But my wife, she must be a demon in disguise. Am I right?”
Rama smirked at the visitor. He
finally put together who the stranger was and knew how to spite her.
The
woman became so angry that her beauty started to melt away. Her silk hair fell out, leaving behind only
ashy scalp. The glow in her eyes burned
red with fire. Her cheeks lost their
blush and became sunken and hollow. The
demon Soorpanaka finally revealed her true self. She screamed in anger at Sita. “Go away! Leave me with my beloved! Get out
you fool!”
( Shurpanakha transitioning into her demon form. Found on Pixabay)
Sita’s
confidence was replaced with fear and she cowered in her husband’s arms,
turning her face away from the heat of the demon into the protective chest of
Rama. This angered Soorpanaka even
further and pure fire radiated from her body.
With dignity and quiet confidence, Rama held Sita close and turned his
back to Soorpanaka. He calmly walked
back to the cottage getting his wife to safety.
At the door her turned and softly, yet powerfully, spoke to
Soorpanaka. “Leave us or my brother will
destroy you. We are done with you. Save yourself before it is too late and be
gone.” He then shut the door and turned
back to Sita, embracing her with his protection and enduring love.
Sita
apologized for her initial doubt of her husband and cried in his arms as the
adrenaline drained from her body. The
realization of what had just occurred crushed her body and she rested her whole
soul in Rama’s arms. He held her close
and kissed the top of her head. He wiped
the tears from her eyes with his thumb and led her to the bedroom. “You are more beautiful than the strongest
mirage. I will protect you forever, my
love.” And with a smile on her face and
sweetness in her heart, Sita fell asleep in Rama’s arms.
Author's Note:
I read the story of Rama's encounter with the demon Soorpanaka in chapter 4 of Narayan's Ramayana and instantly knew I wanted to retell the story. This story is mostly told from Rama and Soorpanaka's perspective with Sita being a minor character. Her thoughts are not expressed, she is merely there to cause Soorpanaka's jealousy. I decided to tell the story through Sita's eyes. How was she feeling while Rama was "flirting with demons"? Was she jealous or was she always confident in he relationship with Rama? These questions are what I expanded upon to retell the encounter.
Bibliography:
Narayan's Ramayana, link to Reading Guide A.
I liked how you retold this part of Rama and Sita's story. In the original, Sita isn't really given a role other than Rama's love, and honestly, we never found out who she was as a character to the story. I like how you took her grace that is talked about in the story and added natural, human emotions to it. I felt like I still understood the woman Sita was meant to be portrayed as, but now, she seems more relatable.
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